Oh god I haven't been to MOA yet and now I see this...
Though it's interesting since few post apocalyptic pictures are based on places in the Philippines. (Someone should really write a detective story based on Manila or make a zombie apocalypse comic based on the Philippines XD).
Then, hahah, I was shocked because I thought "Wait is this dude Filipino?"
There's a lot of empty space in the middle. It almost looks like a bunch of random scribbles. And that object on the left side should be darkened a bit, in my amateurish opinion.
Anyway, I understand that this is still a WIP and I can't wait for the finished product.